suprising good for something that is crap.
well in animation terms, but i feel that was generally quite class. the world needs more of this. Idiot creativity!!!
My tips, well, add a little more detail to the characters and a little emotion. It looks funny that they are animated crapply, but why not try zoomin in when u draw your stuff. It'll still have the same effect but it'll attract more attention. honest.
The voices was good and keep the general layout of the story the same in the sequel.
Ps. don't swallow your neck, it hurts like hell!!!